Mrs Robinson's Year 11 class were working on descriptions last week focusing particularly on personification. Here are examples from their classwork...
Megan Dooney
The leaves fell slowly, as though they were descending a spiral staircase.
Lewis Kelly
The wind strolled through the town, picking up leaves and the odd piece of rubbish before peacefully leaving them to rest.
Michael L.
The leaves were falling, falling fast. Winter is here: death is certain.
Elisha Haslam
The mood saw things no one else saw, both in the night and in the day.
Ben Winstanley
The lightning poked down its long, electrical fingers into the ground. It struck whatever it could.
Josh
Gently tiptoeing from the sky, careful not to make a sound, layer upon layer of snow, clings to every object it comes in contact with.
Morgan Longworth
Thee lightning struck down with its fingers, gripping the lives of innocent people.
Anonymous
The rainbow leapt across the land with a spring in its step.
Connor Gibson
The moon is watching over the earth, like a tiger stalking its prey.
Harry Pickavance
The black trees snapped their fingers in the brutal wind.
Michael Dixon
The moon twirls around the earth, always glaring at it.
Morgan C
He delicately dances down to the floor, reflecting people's unhappy faces, trying to encourage happiness. He comes out every night, stealing with his delicate dance.
Matty Garvey
The lightning: frustrated, scared, angry, the emotions explode, as though they've been hidden for a long time.
Anonymous
He was furious. Striking down with his fists of death.
Kim
Shining down on the earth: she was beautiful.
Jacob F
The leaves were marching down the path, like soldiers getting ready for battle.
Daniel Haynes
Striking the earth violently, the lightning rushes through the midnight sky, like rain in a weary winter's day.
